When I was younger I had a friend named Callie. We practically lived together we were so close. She was my best friend and I’m sorry to say that in this situation a good thing had to come to an end. One day when we were about 6 she was at my house and were were sitting on my bed talking and having a good time. We started to have a pillow fight and she ended up falling off of the bed. She was crying and screaming and our parents came rushing up the stairs to see what had happened. When her mom asked what was going on she lied and said that I had shoved her off of the bed. That was the last time I saw her. Her mom pulled us apart and we could never get in touch with them again. My mom and I saw them recently at a fair and we talked for a few minutes, but it wasn't the same and never will be. It was good to see them, but it makes me sad that we will never continue to grow up together like we did as kids, we will never have the opportunity to just sit and talk in my room like old times, and we will never have the friendship that we used to.
I like this story! Even though this was a very short story it was told very well. I think this was a good post
ReplyDeleteThis is an emotional post that is told very well. I can see how it would have been very awkward to talk to her again after so long.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very well written story and very sad. You did an excellent job on changing the the mood throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Casey on how you did an excellent job changing the mood throughout the story.
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