thats how I felt when you betrayed me
betrayed us
betrayed yourself
choices
need time, thought, consideration
choose one thing
lose another
laughter
no longer a factor
when our faces
reach disaster
words
spoken through lies
hiding behind a cover
shielded
fake
blind
loss of words, loss of trust, lack of friendship
This a very well-written poem, I like your use of some of the types of poetry here.
ReplyDeleteI can tell that you used some of the poetry techniques. This poem was very well written.
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